Writing Homework Help. ESL106 Mistakes You Make When Receiving Bids Essay
Review the lecture on the Perfect Paragraph and then use the outline below to create body paragraph #1.
Remember that your paragraph is a minimum of 10 sentences. Each of the sentences is outlined below. Each sentence must be a complete sentence with a subject, verb and complete thought with a period at the end.
Put your paragraph into correct paragraph format. If you don’t know what that is, go to modules and click on writing samples, and I have a sample called paragraph format to help you.
Body paragraph #1 is about 3 different mistakes you make when receiving bids
Context is the information you give before the quote that helps the quote make sense. The minimum context is the author states or Gottman tells us, something like that.
2] After you post your paragraph, read some of your group mates’ work. Comment with a minimum of 5 sentences to help a group mate improve his/her paragraph, ask a question, and you can tell them specifically what they did well. You can talk about the topic sentence parts, transitions, main point sentences, context, quotations, and explanation sentences.
Body Paragraph #1 outline – mistakes receiving bids
Transition + Create your topic sentence to include the three issues you have when receiving bids to others.
Transition + main point 1 sentence: Your first mistake receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your mistake
Transition + main point 2 sentence: Another mistake receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake
Explanation of the quote in terms of your mistake
Transition + main point 3 sentence: Your third mistake receiving a bid
Context + Quote from text supporting the idea of this kind of mistake:
Explanation of the quote in terms of your mistake:
Body Paragraph #2 outline – your personal story of avoiding a bid buster. Gottman, the author of the book The Relationship Cure
Transition + topic sentence: Agreeing or disagreeing with the author’s main idea that through avoiding bid busters, we can lower conflict or improve a tense situation because of your personal experience of …
Explain the experience in vivid detail: Using transitions to move through time, tell us the story of what usually happens with this person and what you did to avoid a bid buster in a tense situation this time. Include
- Who?
- What?
- Where?
- Why?
- When?
Transition + main idea sentence stating if the technique you employed worked or not and how this supports or negates the author’s claim.
Context + quote from text that speaks to your main point.
Explanation of why you believe the technique worked / didn’t work/ or will work in future .
3-plus i want the introduction and conclusion
